Midshipman (n.) - Officer-in-training. Assists various officers and tradesmen in order to learn ship
operations. Usually of privileged status.
For the best experience, I recommend reading these from left to right, ie start by reading Pete's page,
then Tom's then Charlie's.
33 - Peter Milroy
Origin: England
Appears in: 10 memories
Accepted fates: Blasted by an explosion
Story Summary
Peter (Pete) Milroy is first seen with the other midshipmen in A Bitter Cold Part 3, assisting Emil
O'Farrell in slaughtering a cow. He and presumably Charles (Charlie)
Hershtik help keep it pinned down while Thomas (Tom) Lanke stuns it with an axe and O'Farrell cuts its
throat. When Charlie has trouble with the situation and starts
throwing up, Pete teases him about not having experience with farm animals.
Next, it seems the midshipmen attend the execution in Murder Part 2 as shown in the Justice at Sea
sketch, but are too close to the stern to be captured in the memory.
Pete makes a rare solo appearance for a midshipman in Part 3. In it, he's sprawled across the main deck
with a lantern by his side, attempting to pick
himself up. Context clues tell us that he was likely knocked down in an altercation against the
mutineers who are making away with the Formosan “royalty" and their
treasure; a similar fate has befallen Lars Linde, Finley Dalton, and, fatally, Timothy Butement. This is
the first hint at the valiance of the midshipmen.
Next, he and the other midshipmen are among the crew that are watching the mermaids being taken down
through the gun deck in Unholy Captives Part 2. He seems to have
reached the scene first, casually leaning over the orlop hatch's railing while Tom and Charlie approach
from the stern of the ship. When a mermaid strikes Thomas
Sefton and causes William Wasim's neck to get crushed in Part 3, he leans over the railing even further
to watch the chaos unfold.
Pete once again shows off his bravery in the latter half of Soldiers of the Sea. He, Tom, and Charlie
are all armed with swords and attempting to fight off the first
crab rider to enter the orlop deck in Part 4. Pete is the only midshipman that is still on his feet in
this moment, as Charlie has somehow already fallen onto the deck
and Tom is in the process of being launched through an animal pen. Next, he attempts to get a good stab
in on the rider as Charlie pins it down after setting it ablaze
with a lantern. Although, judging by the possible accepted fates for Charlie, it seems he might have
only stabbed his friend a few times in the process instead. After
the rider and Charlie both succumb to their wounds, Pete rushes to get a bucket of water to get the huge
blazing fire under control. Then, he can be seen through one
of the tiny peepholes in the port walk, kneeling on the deck alongside Tom, reaching his hand towards
Charlie's corpse. However, their attention has been caught by the
second crab rider making its dramatic entrance into the orlop deck.
Pete's final acts are seen in The Doom. In Part 5, he and Tom struggle to make their way topside as the
kraken rocks the ship from side to side. In his hands, he holds
several bags of gunpowder, an indication of their coming plans. Once they get to the main deck, they tie
themselves together with a piece of rope and seemingly attempt
to use the powder bags to fend off the kraken in some way. This plan goes terribly awry when one of the
kraken's tentacles grabs Pete and waves him around in the air.
The following events are ambiguous (I'll get into it later in the headcanon section), but something
happens that causes Pete's powder bags to go off, causing both
him and the tentacle that has him to be enveloped in a large explosion. His body (and the tentacle) then
fall limply to the deck, his face charred and indistinguishable
from the blast. This terrible accident ends up being the most damage that the crew manages to deal to
the kraken before Witterel forces it to flee.
Pete continues to play a role in the story even after his death, even if only in a small way. During
Escape, Tom gets stabbed in the back by would-be-mutineer Olus
Wiater. William Hoscut comes to comfort him as he bleeds out, and Tom begs him to tell Pete's mother
that he tried his best to save him in the earlier incident. He
then succumbs to his wounds before he can say anything else.
Interpretation
Despite Pete only having one line, I feel like there is a decent amount of characterization to be found
in his story. At least, I think it's a lot more than what a lot
of other characters get. His one line, “Never been on a farm, Charlie?" tells us that he's probably a
bit of a cheeky guy, doesn't take things too seriously. It can
be up to interpretation whether this comment was just some silly banter between friends, or something a
bit more mean-spirited (again, I'll get into what I think
in the headcanon setion). His laidback attitude is further implied in his posing during Unholy Captives,
I feel. In contrast, he also showcases his bravery and
quick thinking numerous times, trying to stop the mutiny, fighting the crab riders, and fighting the
kraken. As I mentioned earlier, he is the only midshipman who
comes out of Soldiers of the Sea unscathed, so I imagine he's the most competent out of the three of
them when it comes to swordfighting. He's also the first
midshipman on the manifest, so perhaps these things mean he's the most experienced in general? Hard to
say.
I also take a lot of interest in Tom's dying words to Hoscut. Clearly, Pete's death must have weighed
on his mind heavily if that's what he's thinking about just
after stopping a mutiny and getting stabbed for the trouble. He also makes the peculiar request for
Hoscut to talk to Pete's mother on his behalf, which I feel
can imply so many things depending on how deeply you want to look into it. The main thing I will point
out for Pete's section is that he says well, “Pete"
specifically. It implies a certain level of familiarity, as does his request regarding his mother. Does
this mean that Tom is a very good friend of Pete's? Does
this mean he has met Pete's mother? Does it mean Pete is known to be very close with his mother? I'll
get more into it in the next section, but I like to think the
answer to all of these questions is “yes".
Headcanons
Alright, bear with me here. The headcanons that I have for the midshipmen get a little crazy because 1:
they're my favorite characters, and 2: a lot of it is stuff I've
developed in preparation for a big fanfic I want to do that really digs into their relationships and
backstories. I guess I'll start off by saying I think Pete is around
eighteen years old, and the oldest of the three midshipmen. This is around the age that midshipmen are
usually done with their training and have to do an examination to see
if they can become officers. He's good at what he does, and he knows it, and maybe this knowledge is
making him get lazy/complacent in a way (my citation being his laidback
attitude in A Bitter Cold and Unholy Captives). I guess a nautical version of senioritis. But clearly,
his head is still in the game enough to step up when it really matters.
He is a good sailor and a good fighter, and he won't let his skills go to waste when the ship is under
threat. Despite his outward appearances I still think he has a lot of
respect for his captain and the other officers, he's just eager (impatient?) to move onto the next stage
of his life, and maybe even a little bit angsty about no longer being
a kid. Not sure where else to put this so I'll just say it here, I think a big part of why he wants to
sail so much is that he has an earnest desire to explore the world and
see all of the incredible places and people that is has to offer. It's perhaps one of the very few
things that he doesn't approach with a layer of irony draped over top.
I am also strongly of the mind that he and Tom are very good, long-term friends, and a lot of that is
thanks to an alpha build of the game (plus Tom's dying words, of
course). The quick history lesson is that one of the very first public builds for Return of the Obra
Dinn had characters' hometowns listed in the manifest, not just
their home countries. Pete was listed as being from Torquay, and Tom (technically Thomas Kanke at the
time) was from Topsham. Both of these are coastal towns in
southern Devon, only 24 miles apart. I might change the backstory of how they met, but my current
version is that they met at a boarding school located somewhere in
Devon when they were eleven or twelve, and they got along very well. Then they both ended up gaining an
interest in sailing, and after that they both tried to be on
the same voyages together whenever possible. I imagine Tom really admires Pete's confidence and carefree
attitude, a great contrast to his own personality.
In contrast, I'm of the opinion that Pete has not met Charlie before the game's events and he is also
not very friendly with him. Pete strikes me as someone who can
hold onto a grudge for a long time, and can also get offended by very particular things. Like, he's
mostly blaise but if you say just the wrong thing to him at just
the wrong moment, the facade falls and he'll hate you forever. And Charlie is just socially unaware and
blunt enough to accidentally do that to him. So, yeah, I
think Pete's comment to him in A Bitter Cold was meant to be an insult. I don't have any evidence for
this and I know a lot of people probably only think of it
as banter, but I just think it fits my existing ideas about the characters and I think the interpersonal
drama leading up to Charlie's death would be interesting.
Because in my fic I want to do, I'd love there to be tension between them that is slowly worked through
and their trust is very slowly repaired. But before they
can really get to the state that they can confidently say that they're friends, Charlie makes a great
sacrifice and dies. And I think that can be a really
compelling source of conflict, regret, and confusing feelings for Pete.
Now, let's talk more about The Doom. Things happen so quickly in that chapter, especially surrounding
Pete and Tom, that it's kind of ambiguous what's going on. What
exactly was their plan? Who was the one behind the plan, Pete or Tom? Tom was barking orders at
Pete, but Pete was the one with the actual materials in his hands.
There is no clear answer to this, which is why I'm putting it in the Headcanons section rather than the
Interpretation section. A lot of people seem to think the
gunpowder bag exploding in Pete's hand was a complete fluke - as in it just happened without warning -
but from my understanding of gunpowder that can't be true. It
doesn't just combust spontaneously, especially in the pouring rain like we see during The Doom. No, what
I think they were doing was using the powder bags as makeshift
bombs. As a merchant vessel, the Obra Dinn probably didn't have many explosives to defend herself with,
especially ones that could be used while the cannons were out of
commission. I believe their plan was to literally light the bags on fire and then throw them at the
kraken's tentacles with the right timing, hoping that they would
cause a big enough explosion to damage it. And I have to hand it to them, their plan seems like it
would've worked. As I mentioned before, the midshipmen easily do the
most damage to the kraken before it retreats. An entire tentacle gets severed in the blast that kills
Pete, meanwhile most others can only get a few stabs into the
things with spears and swords, which seemingly doesn't slow the beast down at all.
But, clearly things went wrong. I'm guessing that at the beginning of the memory, when both midshipmen
are still on the deck, Pete has just lit one of the powder bags and
the pair are trying to get into the right position to toss it at the tentacles. However, he then gets
grabbed, and in the panic to get him free, both he and Tom forget
about the lit bag for a moment. But then, at the last moment, Tom does remember. Again, the situation
begs more questions. Did he know that Pete's fate was sealed,
and he urged him to do one last heroic act? Was his demand to throw the powder a desperate attempt to
save his life? How aware was Pete of his own fate? These are questions
that I'm still undecided on, and I'll have to figure out my answers whenever I get back to working on my
fanfic. The same applies for who was behind the plan. I'm currently
leaning towards it being Tom's idea, but I still need to figure out where both characters are at
mentally heading into The Doom before I can really decide.
I guess now I'll talk a little about Pete's family and background, because that's the stuff that is the
least connected to canon information about him. This sounds
sort of silly to write, but Pete has always struck me as someone with some Melanin™. I've tried it and I
just cannot draw that boy with pasty English skin. So I've
built a bit of a family tree that explains this. And other things. Pete's dad is a fully English member
of the landed gentry. He was formerly a captain for the East
India Company, and at the time of the game's events he is serving on its Board of Directors. This means
that the man has a lot of clout and influence within the Company.
This would give Pete quite a reputation just based off his surname, perhaps allowing him to get away
with some things that any other person might not, just because the
officers are nervous about retribution from his important and powerful father. His father also being
part of the gentry would mean that the Milroys have quite
a large estate, most likely complete with a stable of horses. I like to think that Pete liked to spend a
lot of freetime in the stables or around horses in general,
thus explaining his remark about never visiting a farm. Because like, midshipmen are rich young boys.
Most of them probably haven't visited a farm, Pete
included! But a stable is better than nothing, and he's probably arrogant enough to claim those are
basically the same thing.
Anyway, as for his mother's side of the family, I'll have to back up and give some historical context.
Back in this time period, there was a phenomenon where white British
men associated with the Navy or Company would move to India and become very rich there; these men were
referred to as nabobs. During this time, they may have become
romantically involved with the native women there, even having children with them. Some of the men that
did this were married, and most of the time the romantic partners
and children they accrued in India could not come with them whenever they returned to the United
Kingdom. One exception to this was that sometimes, young children
would be brought back, but they were never acknowledged as the nabob's children. If they were lucky,
their fathers would support them in secret, and for women this
would mean giving them a fair sum of money to pay for their dowry or arranging a favorable marriage for
them. I headcanon that Pete's mother was one such woman, meaning
that she is half-Desi and, in turn, Pete and the rest of her children are a quarter Desi. Due to the
messy situation caused by her father, Pete doesn't have much
connection to the rest of her side of the family; he might not even know who his grandfather is.
Pete strikes me as being the oldest in the family, with a decent number of younger siblings. To take
advantage of the “Pete's mother" comment, I like to imagine
that he is very close with her. As her oldest child who is getting ready to really forge his own career
and leave the nest, and one who is planning to make a career
out of sailing no less, I can imagine she is always very worried for his safety and future. She is a
fretful, million-thoughts-per-minute sort of mom, and I think
Pete has just the right softness to him to be able to calm her down and put her mind at ease. Despite
her worries, I think she's also very proud of him and how dedicated
he is to what he's passionate about.
I imagine Pete had to do some convincing for his father to allow him to even become a sailor in the
first place due to his unique position as the eldest son, as it
meant that he wouldn't be in the capacity to handle the estate and that responsibility would have to
fall onto one of his younger brothers. But, after all, the man
was also a Company officer once, and I imagine he saw a lot of himself in Pete and saw that his ambition
was real (in case you're wondering, I'm thinking that
Pete's dad's older brother died and the estate fell to him, thus ending his career at sea). Just to be
absolutely sure, instead of instantly handing him a midshipman
position with no experience at sea (a real phenomenon, especially for very powerful families), his
father made him prove it by starting off as a seaman for a few
years, toiling on the deck right alongside the commoners. Pete happily rose to the task, and so his
father kept to their agreement and allowed him to become a midshipman.
34 - Thomas Lanke
Origin: England
Appears in: 15 memories
Accepted fates: Knifed by Olus Wiater
Story Summary
Like the other midshipmen, Thomas Lanke is first seen during A Bitter Cold Part 3, assisting Emil
O'Farrell in slaughtering a cow. While Peter Milroy and Charles
Hershtik help pin the animal down, Tom holds an axe and receives instruction on how to stun the cow by
striking it in the back of the head. Before making the move,
Tom asks for reassurance that he has the right spot, and O'Farrell urges him not to take too long. He
strikes, and the butcher swiftly cuts the throat with a knife.
Charlie struggles with the new situation and begins throwing up while Pete teases him; Tom has no
comment on the situation.
Next, it seems the midshipmen attend the execution in Murder Part 2 as shown in the Justice at Sea
sketch, but are too close to the stern to be captured in the memory.
Tom then makes his next appearance in Unholy Captives Part 2, making his way towards the commotion on
the gun deck along with Charlie. Pete has already arrived
and is watching the seamen haul the mermaids down to the orlop deck. Charlie seems to be pointing
something out to Tom, and Tom is glancing back to his companion
as he talks.
The midshipmen participate in the brutal battle against the crab riders in Soldiers of the Sea. All
three are equipped with swords and are facing off agains the first
crab rider on the orlop deck, starting in Part 4. Tom is not faring too well in this moment, as he is in
the process of being thrown into the pen where the cow was
once held by one of the crab's legs. Meanwhile, Pete fights off another leg and Charlie is sprawled out
on the deck, throwing a lantern at the beast. Tom seems to have
been left rather sore by his altercation with the fence, as he is seemingly incapacitated for the rest
of the battle. When the crab rider catches fire and Charlie jumps
on top of it, he is only able to stand and watch as he leans against a bollard, still clutching onto his
sword in his left hand. Then, when they die and Pete rushes off
to get a bucket of water to put out the raging fire, Tom collapses onto his knees and continues to stare
at the terrible situation unfolding before him. After this, he and
Pete can be seen through a peephole in the port walk, kneeling in front of Charlie's body. However,
their attention has been caught by the second crab rider making its
dramatic entrance into the orlop deck.
Tom and Pete's bravery continues into The Doom. In Part 5, they are seen attempting to ascend onto the
main deck as the kraken thrashes the ship around. Tom simply struggles
to remain on his feet, while Pete holds several bags of gunpowder in his arms. Next in Part 6, the two
tie themselves together with a length of rope and Tom urges Pete to
get to the main bitt. However, somewhere along the way one of the kraken's tentacles grabs Pete and
begins flailing him around in the air. Tom desperately tries to get Pete
back by pulling on the rope, but his effort is seemingly futile. Then, at the last moment, Tom urges
Pete to throw the powder bag he's holding, but the powder explodes and
engulfs Pete and the tentacle in a huge explosion, killing the midshipman and severing the tentacle.
This is the most damage dealt to the kraken in The Doom before Witterel
forces its retreat. The exact events surrounding this incident are very ambiguous, so I've put my
thoughts on it in the Headcanons section on Pete's tab. Go read that if you
want to hear my thoughts on what their plan was and how things went wrong.
After that, Tom seems to yet again be incapacitated for the rest of the battle, and in Part 7 he is
seen desperately clutching onto the nearby capstan, seemingly having fallen
over due to the ship's intense keeling. Pete's body lies limply on the deck, charred beyond recognition,
a few feet away. After the battle is over and the Escape chapter begins,
he is rather curiously seen emerging from the aft orlop stairs onto the gun deck. Then, seemingly a few
minutes later, he is seen leaning against a wall near the officer's mess,
listening in on the mutinous conversation between Olus Wiater and John Davies. I'll get into my thoughts
on this later, but here I will point out that the positioning of the door
to the midshipmen's cabin changes between Parts 1 and 2 of Escape, implying that Tom entered and then
exited the room between these memories.
Anyway, while Tom is listening in, the situation between the escapees and Leonid Volkov is breaking out
on the main deck. Volkov shouts as he attacks, and this
noise startles Tom, alerting Wiater and Davies of his presence. In a panic, he shouts for mutiny and
attempts to run away. However, Tom seemingly trips and
Wiater catches up to him, stabbing him in the back a total of seven times with a knife (the number of
stab wounds can be seen by examining Tom's 3D model in
the following scenes). A tussle then breaks out between Wiater and Davies, allowing Tom to attempt to
escape by crawling towards the midshipmen's cabin. A massive
trail of blood forms as he does so, as he is rapidly bleeding out.
By now, the survivors from the main deck come down to investigate the situation, and while Henry
Brennan decides to kill Davies in retaliation for killing Wiater,
William Hoscut decides to come to Tom's aid. Once the boy reaches the cabin, next to one of the bunk
beds, Hoscut kneels down next to him. Tom asks him not to
leave him, his voice already growing weak, and Hoscut assures him that he won't. He asks Hoscut to tell
Pete's mother that he had tried his best to save him, and
Hoscut tells him that he can tell her himself. He then shouts for Brennan to get the surgeon's kit, and,
though it seems Tom tries to say something more, he is
unable to and dies of blood loss. Lucas Pope has stated that the reason his body remained on board after
this, is that the crew had wanted to bring his body home.
Interpretation
I feel like it should be fairly obvious just from reading that story summary, but I will go into detail
here anyway to explain my firm belief that Tom is the one
character who suffered the most by far out of anyone on the Obra Dinn. One by one, he watches,
helplessly, as his fellow midshipmen die in absolutely brutal ways.
He is always willing to be brave and try to make a difference, but all of his attempts seemingly amount
to nothing. He does nothing of substance in Soldiers of
the Sea, and, while he and Pete do succeed in dealing considerable damage to the kraken, it is at the
cost of Pete's own life and the kraken flees soon after anyway.
Then, finally, he tries to stop a mutiny. But in doing so, three people are killed, including himself
and one of the mates. It seems like no matter how hard he
tries, he can never succeed.
He seems like a very unsure, shy boy to me, I guess mostly from his hesitation in A Bitter Cold. He is
clearly very brave, and I think also a rule follower. He
does not hesitate to raise alarm about the mutiny, even if it's to his own detriment. Even the bloody
first mate - the captain's brother-in-law - resorts to mutiny,
by the end, and yet Tom never seems to waver in his loyalty. I cannot imagine the guilt he carries as
the story goes on, from failing to protect his friends. But
that just goes to show how determined and full of perseverance he is, even in the face of hopelessness.
And all of that, just to get stabbed in the back, literally. It's not one of the flashiest deaths in
the game, but I do still believe his death was one of the worst; to
me, it feels the most vulnerable. I cannot comment much on the physical aspect, as I myself have never
bled out, but surely the emotional aspect more than makes up for
it. He was seemingly terrified of the prospect of being left to die alone. Even as he was dying,
probably barely grasping onto consciousness, he could still only
think about Pete and his inability to save his life. Of course, it was hardly his fault. Even the
strongest sailor couldn't win a tug-of-war match with a kraken.
But still he wanted Pete's mother to know that he did his best to save him anyway. As mentioned in
Pete's section, the request also seems to imply a very high
level of familiarity with Pete and his family. It could also imply that Tom is rather acquainted with
Hoscut as well? That's more tenuous though, so I'll save
it for the Headcanons section.
This is a bit silly to mention now after all of that angst, but, as I mentioned in the story summary,
Tom is most likely left-handed, since he's seen holding his
sword in his left in Soldiers of the Sea. There are a few left-handed characters scattered throughout
the game, and I think it's neat that my favorite character
happens to be one of them!
Headcanons
This is probably mostly me projecting some of my own past experiences onto my favorite character here,
but I like the idea that when Tom was younger, he was really
enamored with the idea of being a sailor. And I think in general he still thinks sailing is a great and
cool thing, and he looks up to the people that do it, but perhaps
his passion for doing it himself isn't really there anymore after doing it himself for a few
years. To fully explain this I gotta get into some of the
family headcanons I have for him, which have no basis in canon really so here we go I guess haha.
As I've mentioned elsewhere, I headcanon Tom as being from the town of Topsham. Back in this time
period, Topsham was most well-known for its shipbuilding, so I've
also gone with the idea that Tom's father operates a shipyard. It's been hard for me to find concrete
information on this, but I figure that his family is
probably fairly wealthy compared to most others in England, but they're still sort of a step below the
wealth that I imagine the Milroys and Hershtiks having.
They probably don't have as much clout either, because shipbuilding doesn't really feel that prestigious
to me. So the Lankes already have this connection to
sailing, but I like to think that perhaps having Tom's dad's clients, officers, specifically from the
Royal Navy, coming to visitto discuss ship specifications
and such, probably really sparked his interest in becoming a sailor.
Alright, this next thing I'm going to say is pretty out there but hear me out okay? So, as a name,
Thomas means “twin". What if our Tom is a twin himself? But,
that's not angsty enough. And I imagine that he has received a lot of pressure on his family to be
really successful, to rise beyond their current rank in society.
So what if Tom had a twin, but that twin died when they were still infants (consider how high
child mortality was in this time period, it wasn't uncommon
for families to have one or more deceased children)? So not only does he have to be successful on his
own merit, he also has to “make up" for the loss of his
twin brother and be successful for him too.
As I mentioned earlier, I headcanon Tom's family as fairly high class, but still not the wealthiest.
And maybe he has a lot of other older brothers that require
lots of time and money to properly set careers up for them. Maybe they weren't able to secure a
midshipman position in the Navy, as those were highly
sought after at the time due to the UK's ongoing conflict with France. Maybe they didn't have the money
to pay for a notoriously expensive midshipman position
with the East India Company. However, perhaps they had a friend from the Company that would be willing
to put in a good word for Tom and get him a spot with
the Company for a few years, before transferring to the Navy afterward? Perhaps this friend was someone
by the name of William Hoscut? As I like to reiterate,
there is NO basis for this in canon at all, but I think it makes for an interesting connection between
Tom and Hoscut. It's not necessary at all, but I just wanted
there to be even more of a history and relationship between the two before that one beautiful, terrible
moment at the end of Tom's life.
So, to review, we've got: a family that really pressures their sons to do well, a dead twin that adds
onto the existing pressure (internally and externally), Tom's own
ambitions to be a successful Naval officer, and a midshipman position that was granted to him through
the kindness of a man that Tom probably respects, but
doesn't actually know very well. That is a LOT of expectations to be shouldered by one (1) teenage boy
(who I personally put at around seventeen or eighteen, a
few months younger than Pete). And if he finds that he isn't perfect at it? That he isn't as passionate
about actually doing it than he thought he would be? What else
is he to do but to grin and bear it, hope that things somehow get better? He's too loyal to the cause
and shackled to his expectations, and he's probably feeling
that it's too late to consider a different career.
Tom doesn't seem to be the best at acting fast in dire situations or wielding a sword, as shown in
Soldiers of the Sea. He doesn't really do much on his own in
The Doom either. I take these as signs that he isn't the best at this whole sailor business, reflecting
the above ideas about his conflict about losing his passion and
not being as good at it as he wanted to be. To further emphasize this, I plan on portraying him in my
fic as being near-sighted (not ideal for navigation or shooting)
and maybe having some form of anxiety, which manifested as he got closer to adulthood. I like to imagine
that the untucked neckerchief that he has, contrasting
with Pete and Charlie, is an artifact of the fidgeting and hand-wringing he does whenever he's
particularly anxious.
Since I'm already sort of on the topic of his family and I have nowhere else to mention it, I'll just
say here that for the longest time I've imagined that Tom has
a younger sister that he's really close to. They're probably the youngest two kids in the family. Idk,
he's just really fond of her and a bit protective over her.
I think it's sweet and fits his vibe as a character.
I don't want to repeat myself too much on these headcanon sections, so go read Pete's section if you
want to hear my thoughts about their relationship! Though I will
mention this here since it's more relevant to Tom's story, but I imagine that Pete and Tom used to be
very similar when they were younger, but as they got older, Tom
gradually started to have doubts about sailing and became more anxious, while Pete more or less stayed
the same. And Pete will have noticed this shift in the vibes. He's
probably worried about the future of their relationship, especially as Tom plans to transfer to the Navy
eventually, but he's not really emotionally vulnerable enough to
openly talk about it.
I think Tom and Charlie get along decently well, compared to how Charlie gets along with Pete anyway
lol. They seem to be pretty friendly to each other in Unholy Captives
at least. I've got a whole thing planned for my fic about Tom trying to repair relations between Pete
and Charlie but I won't get into it here because I still want
there to be some surprises left whenever that thing eventually comes out.
I guess now I'll chat a bit about Tom's actions around the beginning of Escape. What was he doing in
the orlop deck in the (seeming) immediate aftermath of The Doom?
What was he doing in the midshipmen's cabin before going to eavesdrop? It really boggles my mind,
especially the part about the orlop deck. The best guess I have right
now is that since the surgery is down there, maybe he wanted to pay Evans a visit for some sort of pain
relief. After all, he was launched through a whole wooden fence and
slammed onto the main deck on two very close-together incidents, and I can't imagine his body is too
happy about that. As for the cabin, he was probably just doing whatever
he could to try to compose himself somewhat. He's been through a lot recently and I can't blame him for
wanting to have a private moment to himself, maybe allow himself to
cry a little bit for all that's happened to him and his friends.
35 - Charles Hershtik
Origin: England
Appears in: 4 memories
Accepted fates: Burned to death, spiked by a terrible beast, speared by a terrible beast, killed
with a sword by Peter Milroy
Story Summary
Charles Hershtik is first seen in A Bitter Cold Part 3, assisting Emil O'Farrell in slaughtering a cow.
He presumably helps pin the cow down along with Peter Milroy,
while Thomas Lanke stuns it with an axe and O'Farrell slits its throat with a knife. However, he doesn't
find either the sight or the sound too agreeable and runs to
the corner of the pen to throw up, while Pete teases him.
Next, Charlie and the other midshipmen seemingly attend the execution as depicted in the Justice at Sea
sketch, though they are too close to the stern to be captured in the
scene of Murder Part 2. After that, he makes an appearance in Unholy Captives Part 2, approaching the
commotion on the gun deck from the stern. He is walking alongside
Tom, while Pete is further ahead. He is pointing in the direction of the mermaids, seemingly telling Tom
about something.
Finally, Charlie is seen fighting against the crab riders in Soldiers of the Sea. His first appearance
in the chapter, Part 4, has him sprawled across the orlop deck on his stomach,
with his sword by his side. He's also throwing a flaming lantern at the first crab rider, as urged by
O'Farrell, meanwhile Pete is fighting off one of the crab's legs and Tom is getting thrown
into an animal pen. The events following this moment are ambiguous. We can surmise that the lantern
caused the crab rider to catch on fire, but somehow Charlie also ends
up on top of the crab rider, simultaneously on fire, getting spiked in the abdomen, and apparently also
getting stabbed by Pete's sword. I've looked at the character models
for this scene before, without all the seaweed draped over the crab rider and without the fire so I
could get a better sense of what was going on. To me, Charlie's pose looks
like a deliberate attempt to pin the crab rider in place so the others could kill it, and the crab rider
in turn is stabbing him from behind in what clearly looks like an
act of self-defense to me. That is to say, I don't think the crab rider charged into him and he
accidentally got stuck on top of it, like I've seen some people theorize.
Either way, Charlie succumbs to his numerous severe injuries, as does the crab rider, and they both
collapse onto the deck. Pete then rushes off for a bucket of water to get
the raging fire under control while an injured Tom watches. In the aftermath, Tom and Pete can be seen
kneeling in front of his corpse, with the latter reaching a hand towards
him.
Interpretation
Sadly, Charlie is the midshipman who we get the least amount of characterization for; he's the only one
that doesn't get any lines of dialogue and is in the fewest
memories by a wide margin. Our best evidence for his personality comes from his vomiting incident, as it
could indicate a lot of things. A weak stomach,
obviously, but perhaps a fondness, or - just as possible - a distaste for animals? If he's never had to
assist a butcher with this sort of thing on a voyage before,
could it mean that he's a very inexperienced sailor?
That makes his actions in Soldiers of the Sea all the more interesting. My ideas about him being
inexperienced are reinforced, as it seems he somehow fell over
without the crab rider even being near him. Did he just trip or something lol? But even if he is
inexperienced, that doesn't mean he isn't brave. Or maybe it
would be more accurate to call it recklessness, to jump onto the burning crab rider? It's hard to guess
why exactly he did this, as we don't get to
see all the moment-to-moment actions of the fight. Maybe it was a necessary move to prevent someone
else, like Pete, from getting killed. Maybe he didn't really
have a good reason to do it at all and was just panicking. Either way, it seems to suggest a certain
amount of selflessness to him, which is admirable even for
someone like him who was, just earlier, throwing up at the sight of a cow being slaughtered.
The last tidbit I'll include here isn't really about his personality, but more about his background I
guess. Charlie is a bit unique among the crew, as his surname
implies a cultural and/or ethnic heritage that is not already accounted for by his nationality.
“Hershtik" is Yiddish in origin, meaning it's likely that he is an
Ashkenazi Jew. This certainly makes the Obra Dinn a unique place for him to be, and I'll get more into
my thoughts as to a backstory that relates to this in the
next section.
Headcanons
To reflect his inexperience, I put Charlie at around 16 years old, the youngest of the midshipmen, and
also someone who has never sailed before. As I mentioned in
Pete's section, it was sometimes possible for boys from wealthy or powerful families to immediately get
midshipman positions without any other experience at sea,
even though it was customary to get some experience as a seaman or steward first. This makes him quite a
fish out of water, and also a bit of a third wheel when
set next to the years-long friendship between Pete and Tom. He is being thrown into a very foreign
situation and is trying his best to adapt to it quickly and
start learning how to be a sailor.
I think this headcanon of mine actually stems from the foundational fic of the Obra Dinn
fandom, Fifty-Seven Close Shaves, but I like the idea of Charlie
being kind of this prudish, straight-laced, know-it-all type character. Again I think it makes for a
good contrast against Pete and Tom, and also fits how new
he is to sailing culture. He also feels quite bookish to me, so even if he isn't yet used to the
experiences of sailing, he at least has his knowledge to lean on.
Like he probably was pretty good at navigating straight away, as that involves a lot of mathematics and
measurement taking. I think he probably gets underestimated
a lot, especially by Pete, and is determined to prove everyone wrong, thus explaining his decisions
regarding the crab rider later on.
Now I guess I'll move on to some of his family and background stuff, and for that I must dispense more
history lessons. As mentioned before, I believe that Charlie is
of Jewish heritage. The situations for Jews in England during this time period was a bit unusual. Most
of them were actually Sephardic, having immigrated over the
past few centuries due to the Spanish Inquisition. They had to be somewhat discreet about their beliefs
and had limited options for reaching the upper class, but it
was much better than many of the alternatives at the time. They adapted rather quickly to the English
way of life, following their customs and even converting to (or
claiming to convert to Protestantism. Many made their wealth through finance, such as the stock market
or being merchants. In contrast, Ashkenazi Jews were a much
smaller population in England at this time, were generally poor, and were more hesitant to give up their
own cultural and religious practices. Also, most Jewish people
in England were living in London, so I've put Charlie's family as being from there.
So I've gone with the idea that Charlie's mother's side of the family is Sephardic, and has lived in
England for quite a while as a long line of successful merchants.
Then his father's side is Ashkenazi and has immigrated more recently. I might have some facts wrong here
but from what I can tell it wouldn't have been completely out
of the question for marriage across cultural/ethnic groups like this. But the contrasting backgrounds
for his family ends up creating a lot of conflict for him, especially
when he eventually gains an interest in sailing. Becoming a midshipman would have required him to
convert to Christianity, or, again, claim to at least. Or, he could stay
more in touch with his Jewishness, particularly from his father's side of the family. I think his
presence onboard the Obra Dinn speaks to the path that he decided to take,
although it probably was not an easy choice for him to make. Before becoming a sailor though, I think he
helped out a lot on with his family's businesses, and probably has
a decent level of mathematics and accounting abilities from that. I do wonder if Charlie would've maybe
considered becoming a purser rather than aiming for a commanding
officer position, as I think it would actually be a pretty good fit for him given his prior experience.
Maybe if he survived for more than one voyage :(
I don't really have too many ideas on the specific personalities of his parents, but I think they're
probably supportive of whatever he wants to do with his life. I've always
pictured him having two older sisters specifically, and there being quite a big age gap between him and
them at that. Also, since he had a wealthy upbringing in London, he
probably didn't go to a boarding school like Pete and Tom and instead received tutoring at home. Both of
these factors - being the baby of the family with no one else
close in age to him, and not getting exposure to any other boys through school - I think could add some
interesting context to why he initially doesn't get along very well with
Pete, since he's never really had to deal with other teenagers before. He probably views himself as very
mature for his age, and prefers the company of adults in general, and
especially so at the beginning of the voyage when his relationship with the other midshipmen is really
rocky.